Sciophobia

Jun. 22nd, 2017 08:18 pm
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Title: Sciophobia
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Rating: G
Notes: I do not own bunkers.

She crooks her fingers against the candlelight, casting puppets for the giggling children. Here is a bunny: hop, hop. Then she draws an ear down into a crinkled snout, folds her thumb out, and the same hand shapes a new shadow. Here come the sharp teeth: run and hide.

The meeting is still going, low voices at the table quieting when trucks rumble overhead. The virus, they murmur. Not yet. Yes yet. Too great a cost to use. Too great a cost to not.

Which will they be remembered as in the end, she wonders: the rabbit, or the wolf?

Date: 2017-06-22 10:32 am (UTC)
misbegotten: A skull wearing a crown with text "Uneasy lies the head" (Default)
From: [personal profile] misbegotten
Fabulous use of the prompt!

Date: 2017-06-23 09:48 pm (UTC)
musyc: Silver flute resting diagonally across sheet music (Default)
From: [personal profile] musyc
Oooooooooooh. Very nice, love the atmosphere you're creating.

Date: 2017-06-23 10:52 pm (UTC)
sunlit_stone: painting of a bear smelling flowers (Default)
From: [personal profile] sunlit_stone
I really like this! I think my favourite part is when you describe the motions that change the rabbit into a wolf; it makes the image really concrete, and of course it also emphasizes just how easy to shift from rabbit wolf can be. This is great!

Date: 2017-06-26 02:46 am (UTC)
sunlit_stone: painting of a bear smelling flowers (Default)
From: [personal profile] sunlit_stone
Ha--clearly it ended up working!

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