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Title: Ships, Night, Wreckage
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Rating: G
Notes: When you know, you know. 

Barefoot on the balcony, fireworks above and music below. She curls her fingers around the railing, thumbs scraping rust.

It’s a quiet two am. The hours preceding were ugly. But her eyes are clear, her breaths even; what fills her lungs is an absence of hate, a peculiar numbness, a prickling that cools her bones.

“When did you know?” a hollow voice says behind her, and she says nothing, letting the moment congeal and wither. “Why wait until now, to say it?”

“I knew when I met you,” she says, later, smiling. “It’s a new year. We deserve new lives.”

-x-

Date: 2019-01-02 05:54 am (UTC)
out_there: B-Day Present '05 (Default)
From: [personal profile] out_there
Oooh, that's lovely.

Date: 2019-01-02 11:42 am (UTC)
sideways: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sideways
Well, I just about did a dramatic double-take to see that icon again. I still go back and read the old drabble archives now and then.

"Letting the moment congeal and wither". Tactile.

Date: 2019-01-02 01:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] tickletheory
I'm intrigued. I really liked how this ended.
Edited Date: 2019-01-02 01:36 pm (UTC)

Date: 2019-01-02 02:51 pm (UTC)
sunlit_stone: painting of a bear smelling flowers (Default)
From: [personal profile] sunlit_stone
I really like this! I love the description of the "absence of hate," especially, and it's got a great ending. :)

Date: 2019-01-03 03:54 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] adafrog
Good.

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