Original: Tea and Sympathy

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

Title: Tea and Sympathy
Original
Rating: Gen
Notes: Palindrome poem.


Sympathy and tea are—like a much sought-after, ever-found remedy—compassion-skinned.
A cup, steaming breath, steeping leaf, resembles kindness.
Agony exhaled is sorrow cleaved.
Separateness breeding shame—God, you thank—no more.
Dollop pours out: burden lessened, dregs themselves reveal fortunes told ‘fore ruinous end.
When, suddenly, life leaves one
gasping
for a
cuppa.
Afor’
gasping,
one leaves life,
suddenly,
when end, ruinous-foretold fortunes reveal themselves.
Dregs-lessened burden out-pours.
Dollop more? No, thank you, God.
Shame-breeding separateness cleaved.
Sorrow is exhaled agony.
Kindness resembles leaf-steeping, breath-steaming cup; a skinned compassion-remedy found, ever after sought.
Much alike are tea and sympathy.

Comments

[misbegotten]

Oh, I love it!

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

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[marginaliana]

OMG wow. Just wow. Amazing.

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

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[summerstorm]

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[smallhobbit]

Lovely to see you posting here. (Finally caught up, I've just posted mine!)

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

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